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Whispers of the Willow by *LordofPhoenixDawn:iconLordofPhoenixDawn:



Whispers of the Willow

Like wind upon the many vine,
Through the web they entwine.
Wrapped around what is mine,
It must be true and of divine.

Like gentle daisies do they glow,
Through the wisdom do they show.
What it is that we should know,
To make life’s river truly flow.

Like sun’s rays soothing light,
Gentle breeze through day and night.
Together strong, no need to fight,
And again let the dove take flight.

Like autumn’s dance on this day,
Let yourself be shown the way.
Hold love sacred,  come and stay,
No sorrow or demons to slay.

Like weeping willows they sing,
Tales of joy they always bring.
Let life not be a noose or string,
Let the willows’ voice ever ring.

Wind will carry leaves of green,
Or a color you have never seen.
But no matter how dim the scene,
A willow’s beauty and song serene.
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My first deviation here. Don't be too hard on me. I wrote this with but one word of inspiration and hope it's liked.
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*almalobana:iconalmalobana: May 18, 2008, 12:46:31 PM
Wow this is beautiful, I love the rhyme and how well it flows!

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"Stupidity is the same as evil if you judge by the results."
=LadyFaelynn:iconLadyFaelynn: May 18, 2008, 12:47:21 PM Mood: Joy
**hugs** ^_^ Glad you decided to upload this i like a lot ^_^ Of course you already new that.
*LordofPhoenixDawn:iconLordofPhoenixDawn: May 18, 2008, 12:51:23 PM Mood: Wow!
Wow, omg two comments already!!! :thanks:
Thanks so much and yes, rhyme is what I'm best at I think.
*LordofPhoenixDawn:iconLordofPhoenixDawn: May 26, 2008, 11:56:00 AM
Thank you for the comment and the :+fav:. I did that poem two years and never got nerve to upload it til now...o_o
*LordofPhoenixDawn:iconLordofPhoenixDawn: May 26, 2008, 11:56:55 AM
Yes, and now it lives in eternity in three different places. Glad you like and thanks for talking me into such a fun site. ^_^
*almalobana:iconalmalobana: May 26, 2008, 11:57:58 AM
You're very welcome :) How come you hadn't the nerve to upload it, it's very good...

This is a massive coincidence, I was just looking at the poem on my page ('cause it came up as one of the random favourites...)

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"Stupidity is the same as evil if you judge by the results."
*LordofPhoenixDawn:iconLordofPhoenixDawn: May 26, 2008, 2:13:51 PM
Coincidences are good. I believe they happen for a reason. ^_~ Thanks again and I hope you like my other works and that I can get inspired once again. :thanks: